Dark Poetry #3 |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
At your feet I laid my heart, And you threw it back at me. You toyed with my emotions, Played me cruelly. You enslaved my feeble soul, Shunned my purest love, You put me through such tortures That no one should deserve. So now time has claimed my body, And made me hard as stone I no longer feel emotion, I've become a hollow drone. And now you come to me, After all these wasted years, Asking for forgiveness And to help dry out your tears. But my heart stayed cold as steel For the darkness wraps me tight. So to your shattered body I Can only laugh with spite. Come not to me again, Lest I show all the pain. And make you suffer what I went through, Torture so arcane. My heart had almost melted. My blood had almost stirred, I was close to again believing, All your touching words. I almost felt you aching, I almost felt your fear. I almost felt your anguish, And I almost shed some tears.... ...Almost.... [Grins very coldly] [This message has been edited by IcyFlamez89 (04-14-2003 09:26 PM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
oh good, you pulled yourself out of it! at a later time you might be able to share the feelings, etc., of the other person, but at the same time highly maintaining your own dignity. I like this poem, I was teetering, great! |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
No not really, i shift around but Im always in the dark. Was meant to let off some steam, but it sounded very cruel at the end. |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
Hey, thats a great poem, I like the evil ending!!! how will i laugh tomorrow |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Thanx, hope you voted, lollz |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Lol--I love this, the ending is great!! This definatel gets my vote!! ELMO |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
i love the ending never leave the light on if you don't want to be found [This message has been edited by tornskirt (04-19-2003 08:35 PM).] |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This reminds me of a Chinese saying.... literally translated to mean "a good horse does not return to the pasture that it has left previously". In some way, it's good, coz it'll save your pride in times such as this. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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