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Misery Inc.
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Misery Inc. |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
Hope you like my poetry. I wish for my writing to be discovered. misery inc I've began a congrigation a society to speak but not just anyone's invited I call it misery inc we dwell where the sadness utters to watch butterflys in agony flutter blowing kisses to the grave this world is but a slave filled with drunk sleepers, work manegers and mournful weapers we seduce them with luxury and kiss then with lies charm their bellies with laughter and smile where they cry there hearts are to gamble their graves are to bid and dope them with poison, misery with a kiss now I give you these tools not rules but simple time bomb tacticks just follow along responsiblility is frailty-avoid at all costs fulfill their own needs is a must. Never trust other people and their problems get you stuck don't try to solve them if you suck them you suck the focus of your own personal good deeds refuse to accept harm done to another "forgive and forget" or forget all together Self gratifications are used for healing make personal decisions based on your own feeling Foget all your failurs they only bring you down and soon you'll find it easy to be left undergroud expect more from urself than from another do it right for yourself or don't even bother even the you who are nobody and a failure of life that is curly in our own ways we've become uniqe and that is why I've created misery inc. |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a very good job. I look forward to reading more from you. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
Thankyou! I won first place in a poetry contest with this poem, one of my favorites... Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me... |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
WoW!! I'm speechless!! This is great!! Hope to see more like this!!   ELMO |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I like, but I'm slightly confused. I think, with less typos and spelling errors, some lines would make more sense to me. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! And I can see exactly why you got #1 for this, because this is so wonderfully inventive and you truly create a congrigation and alternate realm here! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, I just want to read this winning entry here in Reflections, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Adora, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
 Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I'd gladly join this congregation, but I think there are several spelling errors in the poem. Maybe you should do a spell check before submitting it?  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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