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my Dad |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe 
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this one is about my dad... you where my hero when i was young i loved you when i was a child but years ago you left and my feelings for you died well, not all of them still hate remains and will never vanish you were one of the reasons when i cut my veins we always were friends and you still hope we are but i can't be your friend for in my mind you left this scar sometimes i wish i could love you again but when i think of what happened i loose my thoughts and without dread i wish you were dead how will i laugh tomorrow |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
 Wow!! This is very dark, The strong feelings u have about your father!! I love how this is written tho, & I hope someday u can find the love again!!! Great job here!! I love your words, they keep me wanting to know more!! Write more soon!!!   ELMO |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
Thanx Elmo...i felt better after writing this particular poem...and it's great that somebody understands my feelings and words... how will i laugh tomorrow |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I understand MellonCollie....good you could write about it... |
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