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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-06-14 12:13 PM


Come to me.
Burn the night's stare away.
Burn the night's eyes right out
and give them to me.

Save the city lights.
They are amber jewels to take.
Hold them sweating in your hand.
Follow the moon to me.

Keep the ash's glowing stitch.
Keep the river in your heart.
Followed sway on through the trees.
Fall into the night of me.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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1 posted 2002-06-14 12:23 PM


"Fall into the night of me."

ummm, ok

and the new pic, hubba hubba

arthur
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2 posted 2002-06-14 06:10 AM


strong images
arthur

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3 posted 2002-06-14 08:08 AM


"Fall into the night of me."
WOW!  Strong...great thoughts here.
Love it Mike.
~Hugs~

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4 posted 2002-06-14 09:17 AM


BSquirrel~

You are doing some remarkable thought-penning~

'Save the city lights.
They are amber jewels to take.
Hold them sweating in your hand.
Follow the moon to me.'


This is just wonderful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Marilyn
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5 posted 2002-06-16 09:04 PM


I have been reaquainting myself with some poets here. I have read several of your pieces and all I can say is wow. I enjoy how your mind works......though there have been some bizzare turns.

This piece is exceptional. Makes you think.

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6 posted 2002-06-17 09:37 PM


Glad you all enjoy my bizarrely turning mind.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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7 posted 2003-04-13 08:31 PM


Still bizarre, still turning
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8 posted 2003-04-14 08:53 AM


"follow the moon to me",  I love it!
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9 posted 2003-04-14 09:08 AM


wow.

This is a modern day description of a call of muse...very hypnotic and full of your vast imagery that touches on the subconscious gut level--

"Save the city lights.
They are amber jewels to take.
Hold them sweating in your hand.
Follow the moon to me."

Are you SURE there are no subliminal messages here?



(tell me you're feeling better?)

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