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Into the night of me
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Into the night of me |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Come to me. Burn the night's stare away. Burn the night's eyes right out and give them to me. Save the city lights. They are amber jewels to take. Hold them sweating in your hand. Follow the moon to me. Keep the ash's glowing stitch. Keep the river in your heart. Followed sway on through the trees. Fall into the night of me. She said burn ... together. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Fall into the night of me." ummm, ok  and the new pic, hubba hubba  |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
strong images arthur |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Fall into the night of me." WOW! Strong...great thoughts here. Love it Mike. ~Hugs~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSquirrel~ You are doing some remarkable thought-penning~ 'Save the city lights. They are amber jewels to take. Hold them sweating in your hand. Follow the moon to me.' This is just wonderful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I have been reaquainting myself with some poets here. I have read several of your pieces and all I can say is wow. I enjoy how your mind works......though there have been some bizzare turns. This piece is exceptional. Makes you think. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you all enjoy my bizarrely turning mind.  She said burn ... together. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Still bizarre, still turning |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"follow the moon to me", I love it! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow. This is a modern day description of a call of muse...very hypnotic and full of your vast imagery that touches on the subconscious gut level-- "Save the city lights. They are amber jewels to take. Hold them sweating in your hand. Follow the moon to me." Are you SURE there are no subliminal messages here?  (tell me you're feeling better?) |
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