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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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I see you over there again, far across the black. Still as a star, glittering with expectancy, your need flays me: pulls lips from teeth makes eyelids disappear. With waste fleeing like hope I wait, shrieking no sound, imploring you (not again.......please...) Turning to my left, I run over the dark plain, panting in fear, knowledge. I glance over. You lope easily to stay even. growing....moving so fast... malice crystalizing..... I WON'T LOOK ANYMORE! Your glee slowly explodes, caressing me with shards of contempt. I feel you closer. I strain....fly... becoming lighter.... chasing light.... the point ahead. This angle of dread accelerating to zero. Your claws catching nothing but a feather of awareness, tearing my eyes open I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Very fast-paced. Exciting piece!!! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Welcome! Thanks for spreadin' yr fear here.  These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Thank you Krish and squirrel This is my first post though I have been reading for a time. enjoy all you write squirrel and look foward to your morsels krish and Wranx -- keep laying down the LINE! B.S. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
This totally sucks you in... Wow. Nice.Have fun at this here place. It's addictive; I'm relatively new (like only weeks now), and believe me, once y' start you can't stop. Stick to Dark, we need all the posts we can get! "Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
liked it arthur nice spooky picture |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
like it very spooky arthur |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Your imagery here is grand m'friend... enjoyed you and welcome!!! we are sorta addicting round here!!! Take care!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damnation! I don't know what that thing is. But, you can keep it the hell away from me! Library! ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I read this because I liked the title...very impressive poem! I’ll go to puppy class…if you’ll go to cooking class |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Still pretty spooky stuff dude |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
 WoW!!! This is great!!!  Hope to see more of u real soon!!  ELMO |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
I think everyone who posted a reply summed it up well. enjoyed! awesome piece ~ Talia |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
something or someone trying to "gitchya?"  I'd read this awhile back, when I was "researching" you--you do have a way in the dark, but I think I prefer your lighter style of late... shards of contempt that caress-- angles of dread accelerating to zero... shaking my head over here...you amaze. you are quite a ride mr. sites. (and yes, I'm going to bed, I'm going...   |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"This angle of dread accelerating to zero." ooo, i like this piece....i've been there! |
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