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Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2001-04-27 10:01 PM

Um yeah i think i have issues with stars lately. but anyways, this is just a stupid little song i am working on. i am not that good at music making but this just wouldnt work as a normal poem for some reason.

After all this time with you,
I still don’t understand anything,
I spend nights lonely and confused,
Nights filled with stars and sighs,

So many times with out you,
So many times wishing to hold you,
So many times you pulled away,
Just one more night with stars and sighs,

I have waited for so long,
For someone like you,
Just when I think you are going to stay,
Another night filled with stars and sighs begins,

So many times with out you,
So many times wishing to hold you,
So many times you pulled away,
Just one more night with stars and sighs,

So one more time you turn away,
One last chance and you give up,
Will it always be like this?
Just another night filled with stars and sighs,

So many times with out you,
So many times wishing to hold you,
So many times you pulled away,
Just one more night with stars and sighs,

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Blaec
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 130
The Sunshine State

1 posted 2001-04-29 04:37 PM

I really enjoyed this poem.
I've had a relationship like this once.
Things always get better!

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2001-04-29 05:29 PM

Very lyrical and a great hook, stars and sighs, I liked it alot.

Regards,
Olias.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

3 posted 2001-04-29 05:39 PM

Very nice theme here, Gin.
I liked it alot.

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty."
coyote

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2001-04-29 07:39 PM

Reminded me of lyrics too! The stars often make one sigh for both good and bad reasons.
The bad star sighs are the worst. Well done

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

amyX
Junior Member

since 2001-04-02

Posts 32

5 posted 2001-04-29 09:03 PM

I decorated my bathroom
with glow-in-the-dark stars
So when the night disappeared
and a sigh escaped
I could turn off the lights
and see my own galaxy

inspiration
from the cosmos
is a beautiful thing

you write wonderful images
maybe it will be heard as well.

amyX

Victims, aren't we all?

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

6 posted 2001-05-01 02:39 AM

Stars and Sighs! They just seem to belong together don't they!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

7 posted 2001-05-04 10:46 PM

Ginners,
I actually had a tune in my head, and couldn't help but to sing this one*S*
Once again my dear friend another beautiful write*S*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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