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jenjen0588
New Member

since 2003-04-07

Posts 5
tennessee, usa

0 posted 2003-04-07 03:24 PM

All the joy in my life
Has been diminished into nothing
Lying awake at night
Thinking cold, hard, wrong thoughts
I feel as if I shall amount to nothing
A cerulean pit in the deep of my stomach
The black darkness that takes me over
Makes me thrash in pain
Writh around like a dying spider
My meaning is destroyed

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2003-04-07 03:46 PM

Nicely written, I just wish it were a little bigger

Hope to see u here again soon!!

ELMO

WisprWnd
Junior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 34

2 posted 2003-04-07 05:22 PM

I know the feeling.
I too am a waist.
But it's ok so long as you are good at something.
This poem made me thrash a bit.
my girl is a spider but shes not dying.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-07 07:27 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Jennifer, this is so very heartaching, dearest friend, I send many angel hugs your way and hope these tears rinse away and that all is okay now! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, dearest friend, weave those gorgeous webs like Charlottes Web and let many see the beauty you hold dear, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lost_Soul
Junior Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

4 posted 2003-04-27 05:17 PM

good poem. I to know the feeling. thank you for sharing this.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2003-06-22 12:38 PM

nice poem. thanks for sharing.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

Forgotenandgone
Member

since 2003-05-07

Posts 52
NC

6 posted 2003-06-22 09:05 PM

This was a great poem i can also relate....coo coo

_______________________________________
Please dont cry when i die
For i will be whatching in heaven
and i dont want it to rain on my funeral...

rapturedmist
Junior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 30
USA

7 posted 2003-06-23 04:59 PM

I know the feeling..as of late it seems like I can't do anything right. Oh how I wish I could be something, just not this waste of space.
-RM

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

8 posted 2003-06-23 06:14 PM

nice write...welcome to passions...hope to see more of you...eor

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

9 posted 2003-06-23 09:30 PM

Hi JenJen, welcome to Passions! This poem is excellent, so full of emotion and turmoil. I absolutely love the spider imagery. Looking forward to reading more from you!

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-06-24 06:17 AM

Nice writing...james

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