Dark Poetry #3 |
Hush |
Seraphine_CoB Junior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 14LONDON, UK |
Hush ... Not a word for it Hurting knows quiet. But by my eyes and hands Hurt knows me best. I am an open sore Some walking wound. With a edge of dry gore Hard to touch- Unbearable, insufferable, Uncured, and wide Like a mile. Dried to a tight crust, Redder than the choking gills Of a fish out of water Wet, flailing at the air, At the terrible blood- That can't be mine. I can't bear to be touched, Screaming never dies- I fade to my hair And shrink like a child. I shiver and shake Whatever's inside. Feeling all, I know nothing, Only gravity like lunar An elevator sensation, Inside I'm a stranger. Given choices to make Which do I move There's no second to guess. Confusion presides, Confrontation lies yawning A meat-fatted lion, By the kill of my pride Lazy and dominant Licking at my feet, Waiting to rape me Always at my side My own devourer, Despondency called me- So I made it mine. Hush The silence tore it I'm deafened now Why can't I hear you anymore? |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
dark, harsh - like chewing gravel. superb. i wish it was a book submission. -majnu |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow this is scary!! I luv it!! Gave me chills!! ELMO |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is just awesome! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Incredible write! |
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stupefied Junior Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 12dead america |
wow..very deep. i like it. very dark, seems like the kind of poetry that is meant to be read aloud. great job. |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
This is really good. |
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