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Dark Poetry #3

Burned Out

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

0 posted 2003-02-24 12:43 PM

Healthy vibrant shells
Stripped down layer by layer
Ashes at the core

We're never really free.

lorenlynn
Member

since 2003-01-27

Posts 203
California Beaches

1 posted 2003-02-24 01:34 AM

short but clearly understood! well done

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-02-25 11:12 AM

Nice haiku,I liked this.Godd write.
Jason

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)

3 posted 2003-02-25 08:15 PM

Thanks for reading. Im glad y'all liked it.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2003-04-26 01:08 AM

I think I'd like to see more of these.

Loved this.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

5 posted 2003-04-26 10:52 AM

I love ur Haikus--Even tho they are short, they say a lot!!

ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

Lost_Soul
Junior Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

6 posted 2003-04-26 10:15 PM

Short and to the point. Very good.

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