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ton123
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since 2003-03-27
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0 posted 2003-03-27 07:01 PM


the waves broke over the voices like
the lights that flickered accross
the nearly deserted side-streets.
Sometimes it is enough to see
inky sky and doldrums
of a day half wasted
in bickering and
making up with
a warm kiss.

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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2003-03-27 08:44 PM


Yay!! Love this!!! Welcome to DP Hope to see more soon!!

ELMO

Flower
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 240
California
2 posted 2003-03-28 01:28 PM


Great! Loved it.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-03-29 01:29 AM


Welcome to Passions!!!!!
Enjoyed your poem!!!!  Hope to read more from you!!!!  Hope you like it here too!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


majnu
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4 posted 2003-03-29 12:16 PM


Welcome to PIP. I love the last several lines; I will surely look out for more from you.

ps: check your e-mail for a surprise.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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