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Dark Poetry #3

First Glance

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

0 posted 2003-03-16 12:34 PM

At your first glance my heart skipped a beat, but your gaze was a lance with not a care for me. Why am i doomed to care for you? Even in spring, with flowers in bloom, your ice lance gaze, brings nothing but doom, and pain, oversadowing the sun with clouds and rain. Why did i look your way, that fated day, when i first saw you my heart skipped a beat, but you were just a pretty shell, just worthless, heartless cold on the street. If you ever glance my way again, ill shield my eyes and turn away, acting like i dont remember that day.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2003-03-16 05:07 AM

Well now, welcome to Passions and a very nicely rhymed poem for your first posting. I do think it might have read better, if broken into poetic format, but I still got it!

Looking forward to more of your work, and know you will sure enjoy it here.

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2003-03-20 07:45 AM

If I read anymore of your poetry I'm going to break down into tears.....

Bridgette

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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