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Dark Poetry #3

him in the mirror

Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2003-03-03 07:13 PM

Every time I look into a mirror he's there,
You know who,
The evil man at my sholder,
He snickers as I cry,
I brake the mirror, hoping to make him go away,
7 years,
Now all of the shatered pieces has one of him,
He is there, and he won't ever leave.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2003-03-04 10:34 PM

my favorite of yours. the fact that the man could be external, or the speaker is qutie cool.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

2 posted 2003-03-09 04:39 PM

Eerie and haunting, I like it.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2003-03-10 06:57 PM

disturbing. at first i thought the man was you then i realized you were a girl....oops..now i think the man is perhaps not mental. all in all a very good poem

Regina

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