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Dark Poetry #3

Fire

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-02-23 01:47 AM

Broken and torn
Through my pain
I'm reborn

Through these eyes
Filled with fire
You're an object

To scorn

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-02-23 06:23 PM

Glad you weren't looking at me.
ouch

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-02-23 08:06 PM

Very early write........can you tell I was a difficult teen?
Jason

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-02-24 01:49 AM

Interesting little piece this.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-02-27 04:38 PM

Nice writing...James

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

5 posted 2003-03-09 05:06 PM

Yeah, "ouch" is right.

Well writ, though harsh....

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

6 posted 2003-03-09 07:25 PM

"rage be now your song, immortal one,"

nice write.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

7 posted 2003-03-10 06:47 PM

this is good,like others have said, "ouch". short and too the point..awesome

Regina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello

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