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Fariegirl
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0 posted 2003-03-03 07:09 PM



Falling into darkness,
Faces of hate,
Not a consoling thing in sight,
I hear a voice,
It says "I know you are there.",
I try to run,
I feel its hot breath on my neck,
I try not to look, but I can't help it,
I turn and see the face of evil,
My alarm goes off,
It's the same dream I've had since I can remember.

© Copyright 2003 Kathryn Duncan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-03 08:15 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is very haunting, dearest friend, I too have had many of these nightmares when I was a boy and I always am unsure if I'm still alive when the morning came! (sad sigh) I send healing hugs and my vote your way, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2003-03-08 03:58 PM


Dreams can be so real at times, I know - I have nightmares I could sell to Stephen King!  Enjoyed!

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2003-03-15 03:19 PM


This brings back memories of jerking awake, drenched in sweat and gasping for air..been there done that. Good poem.
GOlDsparklESS
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4 posted 2003-03-20 12:10 PM


this hurts.
SPIRIT
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5 posted 2003-03-23 11:17 AM


You really need to take the time and pride in namimg your work, makes it more likely to be seen and read.
lawmd
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6 posted 2003-03-28 01:14 AM


Not all writings need a name some are powerful enough with out one- yours is
Flower
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7 posted 2003-03-28 01:25 PM


I would have to beg to differ. The titles on the Topics page is what pulls in a lot of people to read. I don't write and so not in any position to be critical, but I think the 'no title' title  shows a lack of follow through in presenting a finished project and in reality leaves the project totally unfinished.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

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