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Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2003-03-03 07:09 PM

Falling into darkness,
Faces of hate,
Not a consoling thing in sight,
I hear a voice,
It says "I know you are there.",
I try to run,
I feel its hot breath on my neck,
I try not to look, but I can't help it,
I turn and see the face of evil,
My alarm goes off,
It's the same dream I've had since I can remember.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-03 08:15 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is very haunting, dearest friend, I too have had many of these nightmares when I was a boy and I always am unsure if I'm still alive when the morning came! (sad sigh) I send healing hugs and my vote your way, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2003-03-08 03:58 PM

Dreams can be so real at times, I know - I have nightmares I could sell to Stephen King! Enjoyed!

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2003-03-15 03:19 PM

This brings back memories of jerking awake, drenched in sweat and gasping for air..been there done that. Good poem.

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

4 posted 2003-03-20 12:10 PM

this hurts.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

5 posted 2003-03-23 11:17 AM

You really need to take the time and pride in namimg your work, makes it more likely to be seen and read.

lawmd
New Member

since 2003-03-28

Posts 1

6 posted 2003-03-28 01:14 AM

Not all writings need a name some are powerful enough with out one- yours is

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

7 posted 2003-03-28 01:25 PM

I would have to beg to differ. The titles on the Topics page is what pulls in a lot of people to read. I don't write and so not in any position to be critical, but I think the 'no title' title shows a lack of follow through in presenting a finished project and in reality leaves the project totally unfinished.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

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