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WisprWnd Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34 |
Once upon a beam of light, My eyes were torn apart. Oh god I thought that I was right to tamper with her heart. I didn't know her virgin skin could tear so easily. You must forgive, I wish to live. Oh lord please pity me Once upon a frozen flame, my hands were severed off, for making her my lightning rod to everybodys' scoff. Her passion was a trifle thing, she never had a choice. And knowing how she loved to sing, I took away her voice. Once upon a whim of god, My head was cut away. Her life was opened at the seams, I knew I had to pay. Believe me when I say to you, Oh lord, I do repent. For all the pain you put me through, was surely, Heaven Sent. WisprWnd........ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so very heartaching, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way as I do believe we can all be fragile but while penitence is heaven-sent, so is forgiveness and the robin shall restore amends as Shakespeare said! (sigh) This has my vote, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WisprWnd Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34 |
Thanks... I hope it gets through. Please Vote....I want to buy the book, and it would be nice to see my work in there.. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I'm impressed and voting. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
And also my vote, nice job. Jason |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sometimes, I think everything, no matter how bad it is, is heaven sent.... Glad I ventured in here. You have my vote.  Liz I've waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Good write. I voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
OOOhhh I luv this!!! Gave me goosebumps!!! Great job!! U get my vote!!   ELMO |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
That is beautiful. *bows* "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ouch..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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somethinginyoursocks Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 28IN, the U.S. of A. |
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. May I have your real name so I can put the author's copyright on it? I collect poems so I can analize and use them to make my own poetry better and I'd like to use yours, is that okay? -I don't need a signature- |
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WisprWnd Junior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 34 |
This is my life. Post in Dark 3... [This message has been edited by WisprWnd (03-29-2003 01:45 PM).] |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
This is the kind of poem that leaves you stunned and breathless. It was so awesome!! I had goosebumps the whole time!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME WRITE! I'm definetly voting for it. LP1 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
this was great. u got my vote for sure. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
I love this piece!  |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Loved it, very graphic. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
nice job Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sometimes it's extremely difficult to know the blessings while experiencing such dreadful pain as you've expressed here, still regardless, most anything Heaven sent gets my vote for sure. Good job. -Bob |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
This write was incredible, so well voiced and expressed. Great imagery. Nice job ~Sean p.s. you got my vote |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
this held my attention very well done |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
click |
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sykopathicfreek Junior Member
since 2003-04-22
Posts 24ohio, usa |
nice, nice. thats all i can say. got my vote |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Got my vote!! Awesome job on this piece... I loved it. ~Jessa |
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peaceful_dreamer Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 159SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW |
That is such a beautiful poem. You have great talent. Keep up the excellant work! - peaceful_dreamer |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
You know you wanted to get into the book and you have got two in I believe but only if you go in and sign your contracts, they still show up as 'accept' you will lose your spot in the book if you don't get your contracts signed. Email a moderator to find out how it should be done, I would have emailed you but no email address in your profile. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
omg.....this was so good...sad, but good...i loved this. great job!!! If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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