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Dark Poetry #3

Dead Man Walking

That Playa TL
Junior Member

since 2003-02-21

Posts 19
Tampa, FL

0 posted 2003-02-22 02:46 AM

"Dead Man Walking"

i am a dead man; my corpse walks around, but it doesnt socialize
you can see an emptiness when you look into my eyes
i am a faded memory that has been long forgotten
my soul has been corrupted, and now its laying in a coffin

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-02-23 06:22 PM

Dead men talk now? That is downright scary!

That Playa TL
Junior Member

since 2003-02-21

Posts 19
Tampa, FL

2 posted 2003-02-23 08:25 PM

is that a joke? heh

i think of it as a phrase..
"dead man walking..."
like someone dead on the inside (emotions or whatever u view it as).

maybe i just have my own definition of the phrase.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-02-25 03:01 AM

its horrible to feel dead.. the torture as you feel helpless to the world around you.
But you've captured that, well done.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

That Playa TL
Junior Member

since 2003-02-21

Posts 19
Tampa, FL

4 posted 2003-02-26 06:59 AM

Thanks alot to those who replied

People with poor social skills can relate to this poem better.

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