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D edgar Grey
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

0 posted 2003-02-21 11:44 PM


Not sure about this piece, but it's the first one I've written since early December, so...I also wrote another one a few minutes after I finished this, but I'm gonna post it in Open Poetry Forum. So...critisice away!

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"Lilac Flowers"

Sweet lilac flowers
Distract the mind
Mind of the corrupt

Sifting through memories
Bitter as laughter
Joyous as death

Lilac winds flow past
Playing with emotions
Emotions, memories embrace

Vivid thoughts
Drenched in lilac oil
Crawl through my veins

Lilac whispers beckon
Beckon the mind
Entangle the soul

A blast of silence
Overtakes the night
Enter the darkness

Lilac tears flow
Stirring my own
My own tears

Time kisses wounds
Covering past nightmares
Creating new hopes

A pale lilac moon
Approaches the horizon
Lilac clouds roll on

If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work:  "Hello.  Can't work today, still queer."

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-02-22 12:33 PM


It creates a really beautiful picture. All that lilac, I could see it. Nicely done.
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