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coyote
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0 posted 2003-02-15 11:52 PM



"christian soldier"

let war take me
for I have seen
and screamed in fear
as death's hand
bruised my flesh

held dying breaths
and listened to last words
of gods and men

my destiny of honor
lies denied
in pits of putrid flesh
I could not save

silent mouths agape
with absent words
like deafened cannons
roar from quiet graves

though I could not heal the wounded
with these bloodied hands
their wounds beseech
my fingers even now

as they trace the names
of comrades lost
and salute the souls
of brothers never known

"The greatest of all faults is to be conscious of none."
Thomas Carlyle

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SPIRIT
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1 posted 2003-02-16 03:58 PM


'as they trace the names
of comrades lost
and salute the souls
of brothers never known'.


This touches the heart, may they never be forgotten.




[This message has been edited by SPIRIT (02-16-2003 04:00 PM).]

coyote
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2 posted 2003-02-16 07:15 PM


Amen, Spirit.
Thanks for reading.
btw, that last part is about "The Wall".

coyote

"The greatest of all faults is to be conscious of none."
Thomas Carlyle

Moonlight Romeo
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3 posted 2003-02-17 09:38 AM


It has been said that walls should not have names of the lost on them, but only the found.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

cupcake
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4 posted 2003-02-22 01:07 PM


Touching post.
coyote
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5 posted 2003-02-23 05:26 PM


Thanks for reading, Moonlight Romeo and cupcake.

There is no forgetting.

coyote

"The greatest of all faults is to be conscious of none."
Thomas Carlyle

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