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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2003-01-21 01:38 AM


RAPE

Don't rape me in your mind,
Get to know me.
Maybe you'll find my needs
Are as yours.
I might be a passionate soul,
But how will you
Ever become enlightened,
When I am but a figment
Of your imagination.

Maybe,
I am what you want me to be,
An earthy, lusty,
Emotional woman.
I could be the salve
To heal all of your wounds.

Don't rape me in your mind.
FIND OUT.



Happiness comes from kindness.
Happiness cannot come from hatred or anger.
Dalai Lama

[This message has been edited by SPIRIT (01-21-2003 01:39 AM).]

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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

1 posted 2003-01-24 08:16 PM


An interesting piece.  This has a cynical edge.  I think I will store this to my library as well.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

barbaraj
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since 2003-01-24
Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada
2 posted 2003-01-24 09:46 PM


good poem. strong message. does sound like it was written from your heart as all great poetry is.
SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
3 posted 2003-01-24 10:09 PM


Thank you for commenting.
lorenlynn
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since 2003-01-27
Posts 203
California Beaches
4 posted 2003-02-21 01:48 AM


Rape is such a personal thing, is'nt  funny we all do it.
Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
5 posted 2003-02-21 06:17 PM


Good job! Made me realize........that I may be.....A rapist.
Jason

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
6 posted 2003-02-21 06:26 PM


Thanks for commenting.
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