Dark Poetry #3 |
My Mouth (a haiku) |
!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
A broken faucet. Words leak like drops of water. Talking to myself. We're never really free. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
I often feel like this... lovely haiku. Thank you... Love, Moca |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
Yes indeed I can relate to this very well. Nice! I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Very nice indeed. Most, I'd say, could relate very well. I know I can. Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Hey, thanks alot for your comments. It seems I have a slight preference for haikus. |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Sometimes the best conversations in life are done when talking to oneself! I do it most of the time |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Haiku! Bless you! well done, give me more. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I wanted to see more, and I found more. I love these. Do you post anymore or did the lack of responses scare you off? You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Okay..so it has 7 responses..but I think everyone gets what I mean. Sometimes this place is a little slow paced than other forums. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I love this, not sure why, but it speaks to me somehow!! UR right ur great with haikus!! ELMO |
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