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Love is Pain
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Love is Pain |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Love opens your heart and then tears it apart Love is pain... You think love you've found but it soon let's you down Love is pain... When those words cut right through there's no rescue for you Love is pain... When you've given your all first you fly, then you fall Love is pain... In your heart, then your mind it leaves reason behind Love is pain... When you just want to share but the one doesn't care Love is pain... When you're left there alone it's no longer your home Love is pain... All the tears somehow dry leave you asking just why Love is pain... At the end of the day when the light goes away all alone in the dark Love is pain... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-13-2003 04:18 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love is pain, but we keep trying anyhow, unless we get numb, i think ill take the pain, still, at this point, i hear your words, sister, loud and clear. as ive walked your walk, too |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
Can relate to this - well said. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Love yourself, and no one can let you down... for you expect no happiness from anyone but you. And even so, loving yourself and then loving others... you can still get hurt. We are still human. I do relate to a lot of this... love is pain... love hurts. It can be so very magical and heavenly... and sometimes we discover that we see what we choose to see. Aaaahh... such an honest write. Thank you... Love, Moca |
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Shady Poet New Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 5USA |
Hey! good poem.. I can totallie relate to this one.. its a well-written poem.. good job! der is onlee one rain cloud in da sky and its rainin' on meeh... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you all for your great replies to this, as I haven't written too much for this forum. But I feel there's a need to write about real feelings too, not just when you're on the upswing. I appreciate any feedback on this type of writing, as I think it takes more thought really, than the other types of writing. So, your replies are appreciated...sincerely! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-17-2003 05:44 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...when we make the wrong choices and fall in love with the wrong person that would be pain...if we make the right choices and fall in love with the right person that would be love...so some of this type of pain we do have control over...if we love someone and they pass away that is pain...and we have no control over that...just some thoughts...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
James, your thoughts are most appreciated, and I agree with them. Sometimes it's difficult to seperate love from pain, as they both blend so well together. Thank you Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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