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Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2003-01-17 07:15 PM

If I could turn over a rock
To find my Prince so true
Never in my wildest dreams
Would I ever again be blue
He would ride upon a horse
Taking me away from this land
Holding me close by the ocean
Kissing me gently in the sand
He would wear shining armor
Protecting me from the storm
The storm of many colors
While keeping me all warm
His eyes would shine like crystals
Shimmering in the light
Once glance and I am hooked
As the sun shines so very bright
He would love me till the end of time
Unconditional love that is known
Never would he leave my side
He would put me on his throne

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

1 posted 2003-01-17 07:43 PM

Nicely written, eventually you'll get what you wish for be patient.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

2 posted 2003-01-20 12:48 PM

Too nice, too gently longing to be in DARK POETRY I think. Nice read.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

3 posted 2003-01-20 03:43 PM

Thanks for the comments, most appreciated. And for the posting in DARK POETRY. Well I have been here along time ( Under another name for a few years also... Dark _kisses_Within) And I have always posted at least 95% of my writing here in this forum. Whether it be sad, dark or loving... this is where I consider home.

Thanks again
Mags

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

Dedreia
Member

since 2000-07-10

Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

4 posted 2003-02-10 12:25 PM

So sweet...this reminds me of someone I know. I almost wish he could be that for me...maybe in another life. I have been away for a while, but I remember you and your work. I'm back to stay for a while...maybe the long haul. I do still love your writing.
Dee

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-02-27 04:31 AM

Hoping good things happen for you...James

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 2003-02-27 06:04 PM

Spirit - just for your information. Even though all the forums have specific-sounding names such as 'spiritual,' 'dark' etc, this doesn't mean that ONLY poems of that nature can be posted there. The names are more of a signal of the type of poetry that is customarily placed there. However, you'll find that most forums develop a regular group of posters who post poems on many different subjects. Thus, in dark, you'll find many poems that aren't so dark (and, at any rate, the term dark is subjective isn't it? Who is to say what 'dark' really is). Dark kisses has, as she says, been posting here for a long time, because this is the forum she feels the most comfortable in, and identifies with the most...

K

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

7 posted 2003-02-27 10:14 PM

Thanks Severn!

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