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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2003-01-16 09:08 PM


Never again will I see you
Floating so high in my dreams
Turning and yearning for you
Nothing is right, so it seems
The image that you gave me
Was so peaceful and carefree
Little did I know it was lies
You never meant it to be
You turned my present into passion
And then turned my future to dust
I truely thought is was love
Yet looking back it was... lust!
I gave you all I possibly could
My feelings along with my heart
I trusted your every word
Never thinking we would part
One day you will get yours
For it comes back times three
You will feel that of a broken heart
I promise.... So Mote It Be!!!!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2003-01-17 12:55 PM


You’re back! Or is it that I’m back? Either way good to read you again! Love is a high risk enterprise, but if you don’t take the risk ya just never know……..

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2003-01-17 05:21 AM


Well written and strongly done.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



hohenstein
New Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 9

3 posted 2003-01-18 09:43 AM


the anger and pain poor out of this. love is often the most unfair of all of lifes endeavors.
SPIRIT
Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
4 posted 2003-01-20 12:50 PM


Interesting read.
wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2003-01-20 10:30 AM


Trust is a thing hard to build...and easily broken.

Liked this much

~wranx

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