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Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
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Pheonix, AZ, USA

0 posted 2003-01-15 12:25 PM



I crumble quiet
In respect
No confrontation
I die perfect
Fantasize
I feed you dreams
I look inside
My broken seams
I contemplate
What it may mean
I disappear
You wash me clean

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-01-15 06:25 PM


I crumble quiet
In respect
No confrontation
I die perfect

Sometimes it can seem so right to just let them tear us apart ..and because we love them we act 'good' and don't confront them.
But it only hurts more to let them hurt us..
This is good, I enjoyed it, and I hope things get better.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2003-01-16 02:15 PM


this is nice. i showed this to a friend of mine. good work
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2003-01-16 02:39 PM


Eromyna,
I loved the way you express self effacing that leads to self erasing.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Eromyna
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since 2002-11-29
Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA
4 posted 2003-01-16 07:54 PM


Wow. It merrited being passed on. I'm honored!

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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