Dark Poetry #3 |
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Getting through Yesterday, So I Can Have Tomorrow |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
Yesterday I almost caved I know it’s very wrong I shouldn’t be so selfish but I’m really not that strong. Sometimes it washes like a wave Sometimes, pricks like a prong But every time it comes to me The nights are far too long. When it’s here I must be brave And try to carry on For one more day, is one more day To live as I belong. [This message has been edited by sweetwater (01-06-2003 02:05 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
You're stronger than I bet you think you are. Just think how you, from so far away affected the thoughts of one persons mind for even moments, you have the power to bring a smile to a face. Or a frown or even tears.. to just about anyone you ever speak with. You can make it. Maybe not alone, but you can.. An enjoyed write. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I like this one too. You're good at what you do. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
thats why they invented sleeping pills. get some sleep!! take a shower and shine your shoes! you got no time to lose! your a young man you must be livin! Go now, you are forgiven! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
sweetwater, strong pome it has good rhythm and rhyme and I like the way you filled the work with emotion. I hope you don't mind your work inspired this response. The nights are far too long, you say you to the dark belong but in the morning come what may your heart is filled with song for long dark nights, are long dark nights and have no power to sway hold on fast and set your sights for swift will come the day and then the night's working of grace will give you strength to stay the sun in rise will light your face and you belong to day Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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