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alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2003-01-14 03:09 PM

Resting here upon cold earth suffering.
Tired, weak, and filled with ...Nothing.
It is quiet, still, thoughtless, and consecrated here.
Having swallowed willfully all of my passions poisons
I crawl, beaten and battered to this fiendish refuge.
There exists no shame in...Nothing.
Nakedly pressing my broken soul upon damp ground.
Sighing, weeping, and profound.
Having lost my soul somewhere
between the here, there, and nowhere
I welcome...the Nothing.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

1 posted 2003-01-14 03:38 PM

Enjoyed reading this, thought it was insightful.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

2 posted 2003-01-15 04:25 AM

insightful indeed, the perfect touch in describing the agony of boredom.

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

3 posted 2003-01-15 12:29 PM

"Nakedly pressing my broken soul upon damp ground.
Sighing, weeping, and profound.
Having lost my soul somewhere"

Is that supposed to contradict itself?

This was a good read, beautiful imagery. It's something to think about.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

4 posted 2003-01-15 12:48 PM

I ty all and am glad that you enjoyed.

Yes, it is suposed to contradict itself...lol...contradiction makes for good mind food.

Until...ali {the queen of darkness}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch and make you bleed its not worth it"(C)alibaster

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2003-01-16 02:21 PM

hehe nothing...

there is no nothing. there is always something! hahaha

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

6 posted 2003-01-16 06:25 PM

interesting...i wrote a poem called "inspired by nothing (everything)" .
nothing makes for good inspiration.

hohenstein
New Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 9

7 posted 2003-01-17 09:06 PM

reading this i feel emotionaly spent. ive exausted myself before in the misled beleifs of hoping for something better and this reminds me of the last conscious feelings before those travels brought on the blissfull darkness of letting go of the light

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