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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
My heart is full of sadness My mind is full of woe The question to my madness Has an answer I don’t know Now waiting for my final hour The time it moves so slow This world has drained me of my power So from it I must go My thoughts are convoluted My words are laced with pain The actions I’ve disputed Have brought my love more rain Try as I might to change my ways I can’t remove the stain So all alone I spend my days Which drives me now insane This final thought I’ll give her These words I write are true The message I deliver Is now all that I can do I hope someday she remembers me With feelings not so blue And takes to heart these words she’ll see Oh Lynn how I love you G. A. Webb 01/09/03 Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (01-09-2003 12:41 PM).] |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
This is dedicated to and inspired by a very special person to me whom I seem to only hurt. I hope someday she’ll find it in her heart to forgive me for all the pain I’ve caused. I’ve allowed my own self-destruction to hurt somebody who means more to me than anything (next to my boys) in this world and for that I am truly sorry. Please forgive me Lynn. G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
You're good. I always find it hard to write something like this without sounding cheesy. But you've done it beautifully. I admire you for that. You also have my best wishes concerning Lynn. I think I can imagine that pain. I've had some similar thoughts too. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Really nice apology. I hope she hears it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you both for taking the time to read this and for your comments.  G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Nice writing. As I read it, I could feel your actual feelings floating into my heart. You write so beautiful. I sure hope she reads this and accepts your words.  A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thanks Mags, it's good to hear from you. I hope all is well with you, take care my friend. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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