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singular_one
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since 2003-03-05
Posts 14


0 posted 2003-03-10 03:03 AM


BEAUTY AND THE BEAST


Time is lost in hesitation
Searching for an incantation
Which could stop the scary beast
Coming from the Middle East

Beast has defeated the CIA
It took him only single day
He’s not afraid of United Nations
Resolutions and investigations

All men try to run and hide
Somewhere in the countryside
One little, cute teenage girl
Stands in the way of crawling swirl

Without saying single word
She pulls out her silver sword
Seeing that beast starts to babble
Realizing he’s in trouble

A girl with an axe
Come here and relax
I’ll do you no harm
Don’t cut off my arm

I will give you all my loans
Baby, please don’t break my bones
I can give you all my land
Just stop aiming at my hand

Despite of all his screams and cries
Girl tore out both of beast’s eyes
Then she decided not to keep his life
And cut off his head with a kitchen knife

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WisprWnd
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 34

1 posted 2003-03-10 09:43 AM


Wicked!
I hate the Government.
Wont let me live my life.
I think I need the butcher knife.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-03-10 03:56 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I know perhaps there is a system that would work, but I have always detested the word "government", and the root "govern" especially, and I wish for this current system to collapse and for its lungs to grow cold and stop beating with cruelty and for a new order of love to fuel the system! (sad sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
3 posted 2003-03-10 07:02 PM


i liked this. i liked the use of "beauty and the beast" intersting viwe on whats happening. good luck with the submission

Rgeina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
4 posted 2003-03-23 11:13 AM


Different perspective. Not in my realm of like but that does not make it any less worthy of a vote - so I voted.
carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
5 posted 2003-04-12 07:28 PM




Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

[This message has been edited by carol (04-12-2003 07:29 PM).]

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