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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2003-04-10 04:33 PM


PLEASE!!

Burning tears,
stream down my face.
Please let me leave,
this darkened place.
Why won't they stop?
When did they start?
Please help me heal,
my broken heart!
Please lift these tears,
from my swollen cheek.
Please help me stand,
my legs are too weak.
Please take this horrid,
taste from my tongue.
Please hold me here,
if I try to run.
Please take the sword,
from my chest.
Please understand,
that I tried my best.
Please let me get through,
the next couple of days.
Please take away,
this gloomy haze.
Please listen when I say,
I love you and don't want you to go.
Please embrace these words,
because it's the only truth I know!


~It hurts so bad-will the tears ever stop?~
ELMO

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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
1 posted 2003-04-10 04:42 PM


Very well said. The hurts lessen in time, but scars remain - look upon it as character building - life goes on. I voted for this.
qtpieelmo
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Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2003-04-10 06:47 PM


Thanx for the vote Spirit--I believe that everything in life happens for a reason, I've grown from this, learned from this, & took everything away from it that I could & now it is time for me to move on--It has to get better--lol--it can't get much worse!

ELMO

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3 posted 2003-04-12 05:37 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a very emotionally tugging write but I know all things happen for a reason and much better things have yet to come your way! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Katie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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