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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Terrible Thoughts I had some terrible thoughts. That my life would be over and I didn't get what I want. Only brief slices of interaction. Small pieces of satisfaction. Temporary fun. Kisses on the run. Don't know how she can look me in the eye. Am I living a lie? I never get the whole pie. Then I die. JamesLee January03 2003 |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
Hopefully that when you put these terrible thoughts in a poem that it helped relieve the sadness.I know it helps when i do it.But very wonderful! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, at least you get a bite of the pie - some people get none. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
One bite may be worse than nothing. Haven't you ever found that, after a taste of something sweet, you want it five times as badly as before? At least, if you've never touched that elusive prize, you can rationalize that it probably isn't all it's cracked up to be. But once you know, there is no respite. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Interesting read. |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
its like pizza with extra anchovies. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Don't despair, James. Maybe there are other pies. Just kidding.  [This message has been edited by jjote (01-20-2003 05:51 AM).] |
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