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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
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0 posted 2003-01-02 12:58 PM


I feel myself
Losing touch with what I try so hard to find
I see it walking out of my life
Into something new
I don't stop it or slow it down
I just let it go
Unknowing of what I have lost
It's going to haunt me forever
I always wanted us from a distance
To scared to speak the truth
Cause I stand there motionless
Feeling myself lost without you

[This message has been edited by Neala (01-02-2003 12:59 AM).]
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LADY_DEATH
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since 2002-11-29
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1 posted 2003-01-02 11:12 AM

I couldn't picture myself not crying over this poem.It was beautiful!
SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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2 posted 2003-01-03 02:33 PM

very pleasant read.
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-01-03 02:49 PM

Thanks glad you liked it.
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