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Concerning the Use of Listerine for Oral Hygene
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Concerning the Use of Listerine for Oral Hygene |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
The first wave of pain seems so subtle and harmless. You can take it, you've dealt with worse Nothing you can't handle. But it persists and now it increases and becomes unbearable Your eyes begin to flood and wimpering cries issue from your cut off throat. Just another 30 seconds and it will all be over... "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is kind of sick and twisted, and i guess the reason i like it. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Same as Larry: No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 enough to make you gag.  I hate Listerine. But alas, this isn't really about that now, is it? |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Well.... Thanks for the replies. Yes, it is about Listerine. No hidden agendas. No hidden meanings. No hidden sorrows screaming in pain through these words. Rather: I have a toothache that's really driving me insane. Any cold liquid in my mouth causes intense pain. Especially Listerine, which I am using to compliment usual oral hygene. And so, this is my poetic description of using Listerine in this way...  "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
That was funny. Im amused. WinterWren |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
heh heh...couldn't help but think that there was a hidden meaning to this piece...very nicely written! This'll make me sound odd, but I kinda like the taste of Listerine. Shhh!! Don't tell anyone! >; P If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work: "Hello. Can't work today, still queer." (If only...>; P) |
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