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WorrosLanrete
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since 2002-11-14
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0 posted 2002-11-14 07:33 PM



When nothing left

When all hapiness gone

When you wont find it again

When love will fleet and seen no more

When hate takes hold and you cant fight it

When you pray for death and still none comes

When you want it such but are too much of a coward to do it

What left can you do?

-JB

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-12-03 08:05 AM


Do you think there is still hope?
WorrosLanrete
Junior Member
since 2002-11-14
Posts 45

2 posted 2002-12-03 12:41 PM


No

My Dreams died last Sunday
My Heart died last Monday
My Hope died last Tuesday

My spirit died on the whole of the three

D edgar Grey
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)
3 posted 2002-12-03 07:35 PM


Hmmmm...this was an interesting piece. I liked it, but I also found your response rather interesting as well...nicely written!

If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work:  "Hello.  Can't work today, still queer." (If only...>; P)

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