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Dark Poetry #3

How Long Does Love Last

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-12-02 07:01 PM

How Long
Does Love
Last

Seems like a long time
since I kissed you and
now your lips seem a
million miles away.

Can still remember our
first kiss and that sweet
look upon your face.

Can't remember the last
one because you ran
away so fast.

Who am I to say
how long love
should last?

JamesLee
December02
2002

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (12-02-2002 07:02 PM).]

GeorgiaPaver
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 15
Savannah, GA

1 posted 2002-12-02 10:58 PM

No one can put an ending point on anything, this poem relates to me.

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

2 posted 2002-12-03 07:37 PM

I kinda liked this piece, though I try to avoid pieces dealing with romance/love like the plague. I liked the bitter yet hopeful feeling that I got out of this piece...nice!

If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work: "Hello. Can't work today, still queer." (If only...>; P)

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