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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-11-29 11:24 PM


Love Walk

You're treating me
like you don't want to
be with me anymore.

You're treating me
like you want to
close the door.

You're treating me
like you don't
love me anymore.

When did love walk
out the door?

JamesLee
November28
2002

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neveah5
Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197
Ohio
1 posted 2002-12-01 01:52 AM


its devastating when something good turns bad almost so suddenly you dont even know what hit you and its too late to do anything about it
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2002-12-01 08:59 AM


just watch the revolving door go round again,
dont shut it out

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-07-13 10:50 PM


Thank you neveah and inked...James
MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
4 posted 2003-07-17 06:03 PM


hmm...guess i've seen longer ones by you, but this tells so much with so few words...i guess i know what you are writing about...really enjoyed the read

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Magia_negra
Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77
CA, USA
5 posted 2003-07-17 09:05 PM


Right to the point, James
Love can be so... uncertain.

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
   mi vida...

eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
6 posted 2003-07-18 02:30 AM


so short but so sad, it brought a tear to my eye, nice write

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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