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Love Walk |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love Walk You're treating me like you don't want to be with me anymore. You're treating me like you want to close the door. You're treating me like you don't love me anymore. When did love walk out the door? JamesLee November28 2002 |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
its devastating when something good turns bad almost so suddenly you dont even know what hit you and its too late to do anything about it |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
just watch the revolving door go round again, dont shut it out |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you neveah and inked...James |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
hmm...guess i've seen longer ones by you, but this tells so much with so few words...i guess i know what you are writing about...really enjoyed the read how will i laugh tomorrow |
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Magia_negra Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77CA, USA |
Right to the point, James Love can be so... uncertain. ...somos los locos para siempre |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
so short but so sad, it brought a tear to my eye, nice write "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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