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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA 
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Here is quiet, and in it I wait, time rushing by on occasion, but I've given up trying to catch it, bleeding from every abrasion. Nursing these wounds by myself, where I've always and ever will be, sinking into my mangled mind, bent and twisted into this disease. After ages abandoned by love, I don't think it would fit anymore, further lost in a jungle of thoughts, dripping blood slowly onto the floor. Steady more than my life ever was, every drop disagrees with the clock, but realiably ticks away memories, until I convince it to stop. *Shay~D* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Too close for comfort, but powerful writing. Keep up the excellent (and painful!) work! Zai jian Carson If time and space are curved, where do all of the straight people come from? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WELCOME! ************************************* time rushing by on occasion but I've given up trying to catch it, bleeding from every abrasion. ************************************* Well said! [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (11-30-2002 03:28 AM).] |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
the first verse sucked me in and i must say i'm impressed and humbled. great words, fantastically woven. we can only rely on ourselves, it's true... but it's hard to get used to it. i've done a lot of bleeding on my floor as well, waiting for the memories to subside. enjoy your stay here at passions. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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