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GeorgiaPaver
Junior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 15
Savannah, GA

0 posted 2002-12-01 12:40 PM


So here I am sitting
Alone in the dark again
What a perfect metaphor
I'm so tired of this
I know I have no reason to feel this pain
But ofcourse I can't stop it now

It's nights like this
When I dont want to hear solutions
And my dreams just tease me
With promises of a better tommorow
That isn't today yet

You say this isn't normal for me?
Either I'm really good at hiding this
Or I spend alot more time that I like to think
Lost in my head

[This message has been edited by GeorgiaPaver (12-01-2002 10:13 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-01 01:00 AM


Welcome Georgia.
I understand this one, and so will many others.
Now, hope you don't mind, but you might want to change 'here' to 'hear'?

Welcome, and hope you like these blue pages.

neveah5
Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197
Ohio
2 posted 2002-12-01 01:49 AM


yes i definately understand this

and Welcome by the way!!

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