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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-11-20 03:16 AM


I Feel
All Alone

I hate it when I'm
involved with someone
yet feel all alone.
It feels so frustrating
and so bad
and so disappointing
and so sad
and so lonely
to be all
alone.

JamesLee
november18
2002


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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2002-11-20 06:20 AM


AMEN!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

lildevil
Junior Member
since 2002-11-21
Posts 47
missouri,usa
2 posted 2002-11-21 08:03 PM


you got that right i cant count the times that i have felt that way
fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

3 posted 2002-11-21 11:51 PM


Interesting piece.  Pretty colloquial.  I'm glad you are having the speaker allow himself to feel and express those feelings of alienation.  I've met many a person who feels this way but thinks it's the other person's fault.  

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

neveah5
Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197
Ohio
4 posted 2002-11-22 09:46 PM


...especially when the person won't admit anything is wrong or acts like there isnt anything wrong in the first place or...you think when you finally have someone, there would be no more lonliness.  That makes it even harder to deal with i think...blah blah blah..im done now
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2002-11-23 08:28 AM



yep,
you gotta wonder, why even bother then?
know what i mean, jellybean?

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2002-11-23 01:19 PM


James, I do know what you mean. It's a terrible feeling.
Hugs
Sandra

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
7 posted 2002-11-26 11:40 PM


Because I am so neurotically insecure and afraid of intimacy I can relate...I can relate.

The most lonely times in my life have been with someone I loved.

Skyfire
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Riding
8 posted 2002-11-27 11:30 PM


It does indeed
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