Dark Poetry #3 |
I Feel All Alone |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I Feel All Alone I hate it when I'm involved with someone yet feel all alone. It feels so frustrating and so bad and so disappointing and so sad and so lonely to be all alone. JamesLee november18 2002 |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
AMEN! A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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lildevil Junior Member
since 2002-11-21
Posts 47missouri,usa |
you got that right i cant count the times that i have felt that way |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting piece. Pretty colloquial. I'm glad you are having the speaker allow himself to feel and express those feelings of alienation. I've met many a person who feels this way but thinks it's the other person's fault. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
...especially when the person won't admit anything is wrong or acts like there isnt anything wrong in the first place or...you think when you finally have someone, there would be no more lonliness. That makes it even harder to deal with i think...blah blah blah..im done now |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yep, you gotta wonder, why even bother then? know what i mean, jellybean? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, I do know what you mean. It's a terrible feeling. Hugs Sandra |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Because I am so neurotically insecure and afraid of intimacy I can relate...I can relate. The most lonely times in my life have been with someone I loved. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
It does indeed |
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