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WorrosLanrete
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0 posted 2002-11-14 07:36 PM



Eyes of hate pierce the day

Destroy he then all of light

Blood rains down on new stained earth

Be none left yet still he fight

God then peers on empty place

He Looks Up And Eyes Still Hate

-JB

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-12-07 03:39 PM


I guess I'm an optimist...I think God sees more than hate.
Match
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2 posted 2002-12-07 03:55 PM


I like it but I don't agree with it, but anyways good write
WorrosLanrete
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3 posted 2002-12-07 06:49 PM


Guess I can write this out in descriptive form.  It describes someone who has only hate behind his eyes.  He destroys everything that is good.  The world is stained and can never be what it was.  Nothing is left to destroy, but still he destroys.  God looks down on the empty earth where his beloved children are gone and no goodness remains.  The hateful one looks up at God and still hates him.  Both God and the hateful stare into eachothers eyes and both know that he will always hate the good and that he will never stop destroying.  Its the darkest end of the 9 poems
LADY_DEATH
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4 posted 2002-12-07 08:14 PM


I really don't believe in God but Good Job!
fractal007
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5 posted 2002-12-07 09:12 PM


Interesting poetry you have here.  You are rather good at creating scenes like thing and preserving a good meter.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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