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Eyes of Hate
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Eyes of Hate |
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WorrosLanrete Junior Member
since 2002-11-14
Posts 45 |
Eyes of hate pierce the day Destroy he then all of light Blood rains down on new stained earth Be none left yet still he fight God then peers on empty place He Looks Up And Eyes Still Hate -JB |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I guess I'm an optimist...I think God sees more than hate. |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I like it but I don't agree with it, but anyways good write |
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WorrosLanrete Junior Member
since 2002-11-14
Posts 45 |
Guess I can write this out in descriptive form. It describes someone who has only hate behind his eyes. He destroys everything that is good. The world is stained and can never be what it was. Nothing is left to destroy, but still he destroys. God looks down on the empty earth where his beloved children are gone and no goodness remains. The hateful one looks up at God and still hates him. Both God and the hateful stare into eachothers eyes and both know that he will always hate the good and that he will never stop destroying. Its the darkest end of the 9 poems |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
I really don't believe in God but Good Job! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Interesting poetry you have here. You are rather good at creating scenes like thing and preserving a good meter. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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