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LADY_DEATH
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since 2002-11-29
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0 posted 2002-12-06 11:27 AM


Remembering my Past
Learning to survive alone
Where was my mother?
Always putting me down
Nothing I managed to do
Seemed to turn up her frown
Always calling me stupid
And telling me what I'd never amount
But I became strong
With my Life...I've moved on
To be a better person
And show her she was wrong!!

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2002-12-06 12:01 PM



good poem on a sore spot for you.........try to do better by your kids, that much i can say

PoetOfDarkness2002
Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41
Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world
2 posted 2002-12-06 08:29 PM


This poem is really good...It shows some pain but some courage and bravery too, I can relate to it soo well, keep writing!

Love Always,
Manda aka POD

Star T
Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182
Philadelphia, US
3 posted 2002-12-06 09:47 PM


there u go!!!
Opeth
Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543
The Ravines
4 posted 2002-12-07 01:39 PM


It is a shame that some parents not only abuse their children physically, but mentally as well.
fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

5 posted 2002-12-07 09:22 PM


It's always nice to show your elders they are wrong when they have stiff-necked unreasonable assumptions about you.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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