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Beast Once More |
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WorrosLanrete Junior Member
since 2002-11-14
Posts 45 |
Grows he then most lonely one Comes she whence unto he Calms the heart of savage beast Filled with love is all he is When she leaves what be left Lonely one beast once more -JB |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sad, but often the way it goes. Love can be a real beast. |
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WorrosLanrete Junior Member
since 2002-11-14
Posts 45 |
I am the beast Love was the only cure -_- |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is good..very lyrical. But I think you are not the beast - that implies that you think you don't deserve love and everyone does.  |
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WorrosLanrete Junior Member
since 2002-11-14
Posts 45 |
I doubt I do Life seems to have a way of making sure I am unhappy -_- |
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WorrosLanrete Junior Member
since 2002-11-14
Posts 45 |
I was in DEEP depression last weekend and in my tears could only form slight phrases. All these poems are pretty much the rawness of my thoughts those few days, the smallest I could get out with the thought still being formed. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is nice and short, but carries quite a lot of imagination with it. It sounded like a mixture between fantasy and romantic love to me. Very well done. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
enjoyed..... |
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