Dark Poetry #3 |
An Unblinking Warning |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is the last time you'll suck drain me of my tears my strength and hope all in one thoughtless moment. The bite of your voice has become unbearable and I am wasting away on the drug of your sarcasm. Don't tear my heart don't bother because you can't cause another rip in what was already shredded. So use the front teeth of your voice go ahead and you'll see now that I can bite and rage and become the animal you think you are. I'm wrecked crushed beneath the weight of the steering wheel and you can't touch me here because I'm already angry already suffocating beneath the pressure of the twist in my reason. There are seasons, sometimes quitely arranged within my heart and this is a cold one carefully manufactured by the slip of a precision blade made of sharpened thoughtless words. (and every artist of love has contributed to the cruelty) It cuts a deep path made of cooled down tears and in this moment you are unbearable for my heart to yield to. Rest your tongue, Dear. It is tired from your multiple apologies that scream and beg from beneath the futility of their demise. I lean towards temper more and can you handle it? Can you learn the side of me that can't be forgiving? Can you really continue to break my will with your words and expect to live with the me you'll create with your weapons of choice? Don't tangle your sword with mine I'm resolved. If you want a battle I'm willing to defend to conquer to never bend to the sway of your harsh wind. I'm tasting the clash of wills in an early omen wind and the sparks will blind us both in the end, but if you want a battle It is my instinct to deliver a hard fist in the face of your stubborn temper. And Dear, if you want love you'd better start rewriting the second half of your script. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Jennifer, I enjoyed the sarcasm and anger in this piece. Your imagery is superb and quite original. You continue to amaze me with your skill. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
It would seem that you have been busy with your thoughts. This is good. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
I love this line "...wasting away on the drug of your sarcasm" Awesome poem. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
What writing! |
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