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Dark Poetry #3

Doldrums

Stryder
Junior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 29
Silent Hill

0 posted 2002-11-11 10:01 PM

I lounge around,
  Staring into nothingness, oblivious
Listening to sound of the rain, awake
  But not fully aware of existence.
The clock making itself known,
  Every fifteen minutes.
The strings on my guitar, untuned
  A familiar melody playing in the distance.
Thoughts of the past flooding my mind
  Reflections.
Voices piercing through me, screaming
  Echoes.
Anger building inside, intensifying
  Intensifying.
Demons multiplying within, reaching
  Reaching.
And as I waste away the day,
  A day that was once full of possibilities.
I try to recall sadder days,
  Doldrums.

-Stryder

"Two wrongs don't make a right,
but three rights make a left."

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

1 posted 2002-11-14 02:57 AM

i like that, it has good rythym.
and it has an urgency.
i think its very good.

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