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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
Spectacular blow out of nowhere connects with the temple to wrestle the ego blurred conciousness scars indestructable angels fragments of illumination sharp vampire recoil crumbling ashes of shape shifting ether seduced by adventure raped by experience Heretic |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I liked the wry, worldly feeling of this. My only bit of contention is you title the poem "Head wound" and yet it appears to be more about life's blows. Love the way you tangled words into new meanings. Hmm, perhaps "Blows to the head"? Wound makes me think of an open, bloody thing. Mike |
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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
Yep! life's blows.....I might have entitled this brain damage! I kind of like the dichotomy of interpretation...just to make you think a bit! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yanno? These things never do, quite heal. Phrenology, anyone? Ed |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I agree with bsquirrel it seems to be about the hard blows life deals to you I thought it was going to be more about a physical head wound but nonetheless I enjoyed it a lot |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
without being polarised in opinion, i like it. |
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