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fractal007
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0 posted 2002-11-01 09:44 PM


hell and fire
the first record of tactical alliance with Rikkia

Streets are cracked and roads are parched
fighting machines march this way and that
intelligence reports are like trading cards
the first record of tactical alliance with Rikkia

Marching side by side with the old enemy
thwarting authorities on every front
confusing spies in this unstable region
the first record of tactical alliance with Rikkia

let's put out this fire
we can rebuild together
let's destroy the past
the first record of tactical alliance with Rikkia

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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~K
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1 posted 2002-11-12 02:31 AM


Yes, that is very cool. I read this once before but wasn't quite sure what to make of it. After reading your other one though it just fell into place.Nice!
majnu
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2 posted 2002-11-14 01:20 AM


okay, there are some great images here, but: what the hell are you talking about?

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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