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dougsbird21
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since 2002-11-08
Posts 52
London(from TX though)

0 posted 2002-11-09 10:30 AM


Solemn

I see you
make me laugh
    reach out
  in pure darkness
see you
see me
    don’t you dare
touch
me
I am untouchable
in synch
                  within my own
solemn
in my
   i
           n
     s
      a
       n
i
t
  y  

"Write what you feel, not what u think you should feel."

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Cherubini/Somerset - All Rights Reserved
leafseranade
Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
1 posted 2002-11-09 08:47 PM


Very nice form poem!  Reading over this again I realize just how much I relate to my understanding of your words.  I'm in such a whirl pool, I have a hard time being touched or loved right now.  Good job!  
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