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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
I am drowning In this sea of desire... And I desire it no more. I need desperately the air I am so accustomed to Breathing... this can not Replace what my lungs Scream for. I am drowning of my Own desire And I choose not to Drown anymore. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
G'day... Good way you've worded this...  It's better to be a lion for a day than a sheep all your life. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
yes don't yourself drown |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
i love your choice of images here. very nice! "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice write, enjoyed the flow and the thought correlation used. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice flow and thought correlation. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sounds very strong!! Good for you. Keep the fight. I enjoyed the strength.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Moca, good for you . . . I know it is tough but you just gotta keep on keepin, ya know? *smile* Don't let them take your breath, would be a crime xxoo |
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