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Dark Poetry #3

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~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

0 posted 2002-10-19 09:27 AM

Dripping from
my lips
your kiss
a glimpse into
eternity
& I would gladly
sell my soul
for one more taste
of what could
never be

Match
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since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2002-10-19 04:00 PM

Well this poem was really good, I liked it

WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

2 posted 2002-10-19 05:08 PM

Great work....enjoyed.

DeaDiAmore

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

3 posted 2002-10-19 11:45 PM

Short, Sweet, and to the point but it still makes me think. A very good piece I must say!

"It will consume us all one day...
The DARKNESS, I'm talkin' 'bout."

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

4 posted 2002-10-20 01:02 AM

I liked this bit...is rather fitting with my mood right now...

"Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

5 posted 2002-10-20 02:18 AM

Thank you all so much for the feedback! I can see I am going to really enjoy it here!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-10-20 07:31 AM

While a dark poem, it is short, succinct and to the point. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2002-10-20 12:14 PM

another taste of what could never be--

I may be ready to sell my soul for a moment as well!

wonderful poem, K.

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