Dark Poetry #3 |
Frankenstein's Ghost |
Nerys New Member
since 2002-10-18
Posts 1 |
Morphine lullabies in folded pockets of spacetime the fresh wound is an old scar stitched together by my need to escape you, forget you by whatever means available created to destroy you and miss you always |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! I imagine Frankenstein had his own private nightmares...please check your email for a special greeting. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome, mistress of F, to this land of poetry. When you find a way to forget him, will you please post it here, and share the secret with the rest of us? |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Ni hao! Welcome to Pip...I don't come here very often, but it's always nice to get advice from people who actually know how to write poetry, so I enjoy my little visits! Hmm...I liked the opening of this piece, especially because it made me feel that the ending was going to be quite different from what it was. That's my favourite thing about poetry: unexpected endings! And you have done an excellent job with that! Keep up the nice work!! Zai jian. "Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones |
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Succubus Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 82Canada, Ontario |
Welcome... I really enjoyed your piece. "Your Distinctiveness Will be Gladly Added to Our Own..." "You Have Been Assimilated..." Lator, Succubus Some say it's better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing... |
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