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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2002-10-14 10:47 PM


Leaves shadow a Familiar face,
As the mountainous smile glares across his face.

He stands secretly behind stone.
His name etched in with sins of his own path.

His pants to long for comfort,
Leaving him dragging with clumsy greed.
But Owls can only cater to his luminous gloom.

His shielded grin,
Covers his stainless soul,
Making others think he is two different colors.

Classic ties of birds
Surround his overgrown head,
As he sits there muddling,
I wish I were dead.

He chastises anyone who is close,
But seems inept in reaching for his clothes.

Night falls,
As pebbles dance on the riverfront.
As his shadow sleeps to the pin of the moon.
© Copyright 2002 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Zall
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since 2002-08-25
Posts 214
London, England
1 posted 2002-10-15 04:30 AM

"Leaving him dragging with clumsy greed.
But Owls can only cater to his luminous gloom."

I love this line,

Great work

Zall
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